Hmm... Convulsively might have actually worked there. I've seen it used a few times in a similar sentence, and it didn't look too awkward. The change reads just fine, however. :)
Thank for for this chapter! I for one greatly appreciate that you're taking the time to translate this story.
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Date: 2007-02-28 10:18 pm (UTC)Thank for for this chapter! I for one greatly appreciate that you're taking the time to translate this story.