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Title: Draco Malfoy Unwrapped 2/?
Author: [livejournal.com profile] dripping_cherry
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Rating: NC-17 (eventually)
Wordcount: 1,100
Disclaimer: Harry Potter is the property of J.K. Rowling and associated publishers. No copyright infringement is intended. No profit is being made from this fiction. All characters engaged in sexual activity are over the age of 18.
Warnings: OOC-ness (Harry is cocky, and he sleeps around ;)
Summary: He’s like an exquisite piece of candy, protected by so many layers of wrapping that no one’s ever had the patience to get him naked. But I’m Harry Potter, dammit, and I want him for dessert.
A/N: Please note that the Browns in this fic are unrelated to Lavender Brown.



Prologue, Chapter 1




It’s a quarter past eleven. I should have known he wouldn’t come. He’ll probably laugh at me tomorrow for actually believing he’d go on a date with me. “Your conceitedness knows no bounds, Potter,” he’ll drawl.

My fingers tap the wooden table impatiently. Should I go? Maybe I should give him a few more minutes. He could be running late. A dark, handsome bloke across the room is sending me looks. Not bad. Maybe if Draco doesn’t show up, I can take him home instead.

“Looking for me?” a familiar bored voice asks.

Damn, I hope he didn’t realise I was appraising that other man.

“As a matter of fact, I was."

He looks gorgeous in his faded grey jeans and shimmery green button-down shirt. His hair is slicked back, as usual. I actually hoped he’d skip the gel tonight—there’s nothing sexier than soft, tousled blond hair in bed. He takes the seat across from me and looks around.

“Interesting choice of place,” he says.

“I thought you’d like it.”

Babalou has a unique atmosphere. The bar is located in the crypt of an old church. I don't really know what Draco likes, but I thought it might appeal to him.

“I never said I didn’t." He picks up the menu. "Shall we order?”

I watch his eyes as he skims the list of available drinks.

“What are you having?” I ask when he puts the booklet down.

“Dee Monk. You?”

I open my mouth to answer, but just then the waitress comes to take our order. “One Between the Sheets,” I say, watching Draco's reaction. He narrows his eyes and pretends I'm not there.

“So, how's work?" Okay, that was a pathetic attempt at conversation, but I feel so tongue-tied around him.

He looks at me like I'm retarded. "We were just there." He raises an eyebrow. "We're partners, remember?"

I sink lower in my seat. This prove more difficult than I think. "Yes, I remember."

Now he's just sitting there, staring at his lap while we wait for our drinks. Why did he even agree to this date? He obviously doesn't want to be here.

"Why'd you ask me out?" His voice is so quiet that I can't be sure I heard him.

Why the bloody hell does he think I asked him out? “Because I’m attracted to you.” I can actually feel my cheeks burning. Wow, that hasn't happened in years.

His face falls. “Is that the only reason?”

“No,” I say. “I also thought it’d be interesting to get together and talk a bit. We’ve shared an office for a year now, and we barely know each other.”

He smiles shyly. I think it might be the first genuine smile I’ve ever seen on his face. It looks good.

“Yeah, I know what you mean.”

The waitress returns with our drinks. We thank her before she leaves, and then we each take a sip.

“How is it?” I ask.

“It’s—different. Not bad, though.” He doesn’t look convinced.

“You should try what I’m having.”

He narrows his eyes again. “No thanks.”

We slowly resume our chit chat, and I can’t help but feel like a bore. I’d like to impress him, but I’m not sure that I can. Whatever opinion he's formed of me over the years isn't likely to change in one evening, even if I do manage to say something witty.

As soon as we finish our drinks, I take the opportunity to ask him to dance. That’s one thing I can actually do, though it took me endless hours and countless nights spent hitting the clubs to finally get the hang of it. Surprisingly, he agrees.

I don’t know the song that’s playing, but it has a nice rhythm. I lead him onto the floor and pull him close, but not so close as to send him the wrong message.

He’s a bit shy at first, but soon he begins to move as well as any of them. As time passes, I can feel his body beginning to press more insistently against mine. I drink in the sight of him—his eyes fluttering, his face flushed. Forgetting any inhibitions I may have had about moving too fast, I plant my lips on his and slip my tongue into his mouth when he gasps in surprise.

I can’t hear his moan, but I can feel it vibrating on my lips. Every movement of his tongue against mine sends a jolt to my cock. I know he's enjoying this, too, because his erection is rubbing against my hip. This is the point when I usually take my dancing partner home and move our activities to the bedroom. Something inside me says I shouldn’t do the same thing with him as I’ve done with countless others, but I want him so much. The skin of his neck is like satin, and I suck it hungrily in between my lips.

Suddenly he pulls away and disappears into the crowd. I assume he's heading for the door and head in that direction. By the time I catch up to him, he’s outside, looking for a secluded spot to Disapparate.

I grab his arm. “What’s wrong? Why’d you leave like that?”

Heaving a sigh, he turns to look at me, his lips formed into a frown. “Harry, I don’t want to be another name for you to cross off of your list.”

“What?” That was a stupid question-- I know exactly what he’s talking about.

“You know exactly what I’m talking about,” says Draco.

How do I respond to that? “There’s no list, Draco.”

He rolls his eyes. “Oh, well I suppose that makes everything better. Let’s go back to your place, then.” The sarcasm in his voice pierces my chest like a dagger. But I’m defenseless. As much as I’d like to say that I didn’t ask him out with the intention of ending the date in bed, it just isn’t true.

“Draco, I’m sorry--"

He looks away. “Don’t worry about it. I’ll see you at work.”

I nod. At this point, there’s nothing I can do to save myself. “Yeah, see you.”

He Disapparates, leaving me alone in the churchyard to contemplate my mistakes. Merlin, I’ve really screwed this up.

Chapter 3

Date: 2009-03-07 10:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
Oh no! I knew things were going too well! You never know, Harry...he might surprise you in the end. So to speak...

More please?

Date: 2009-03-07 10:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
Well he can't expect to get Draco in his bed without any effort on his own part, can he?

Thanks for reading. It might be a few days before I update again. I need to get started on my worldcup fic!

Date: 2009-03-07 10:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lijahlover.livejournal.com
WOW! I can't wait to see were this goes.

Date: 2009-03-07 10:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
I'm glad you're interested :) Thanks for reading and commenting.

Date: 2009-03-07 11:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] utteramusement.livejournal.com
Even one with the best of intentions would have a hard time not wanting to end the night in bed with Draco Malfoy and Harry doesn't have the best intentions even if he'd like to :P

Date: 2009-03-07 11:40 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-03-08 12:22 am (UTC)

Date: 2009-03-08 12:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
Unfortunately for Harry, yes :(

Date: 2009-03-08 01:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] qumabh.livejournal.com
Well... Harry was asking for it, being such a slut; I want them to be happy though. *sniffle* Maybe it will get better :) I look forward to the next update.

~Mab

Date: 2009-03-08 01:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for reading.

Date: 2009-03-08 02:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] monster-o-love.livejournal.com
Awwww, that's so sad. :( Draco is just so sweetly innocent here *adores him* that Harry's gonna have to really try hard to come up with some new dating techniques, me thinks...

Date: 2009-03-08 03:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
Innocent Draco is ♥

Thanks for reading :)

Date: 2009-03-08 07:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adores-draco.livejournal.com
I'm so happy you're finally continuing this! I read the first three parts about a year ago and I've been looking forward to the rest of the story. I do hope Draco will soon realise that he's not just another notch at Harry's bedpost.

Date: 2009-03-08 01:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
Oh, but Harry is going to have to realize it before Draco does.

I'm happy you're following this again :)

Date: 2009-03-08 11:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fantasyfruitbat.livejournal.com
Poor Harry! Does he even properly realise that he wants more from Draco than sex? Never mind, Harry, you'll work it out (eventually)!!
*looking forward to more*

Date: 2009-03-08 01:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
Sadly, he doesn't.

Thanks for reading!

Date: 2009-03-08 11:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cassie-black12.livejournal.com
I love Virgin!Draco. I know most people write him as a bit of a slut, but I much prefer him innocent!

Harry's so clueless, bless him.

Date: 2009-03-08 01:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
To be honest, I don't really understand why that is. Obviously him being a virgin at 22 isn't realistic, either, but I just don't think he's the type that sleeps around.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Date: 2009-03-08 12:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] interrobanging.livejournal.com
Oh, Harry, you dear, clueless manwhore.

Loving this so far!!

Date: 2009-03-08 01:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
He really is one!

Thanks for reading :)

Date: 2009-03-08 02:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yaoi-ezi.livejournal.com
It seems like Harry is going to have to switch his game up if he plans on unwrapping Draco. He needs to learn not to treat Draco as a sexual conquest and to honestly try to get to know him... but then that's the challenge for Harry isn't it since all he knows is getting people into his bed

Date: 2009-03-08 03:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
Yes, he's going to have to work on that...

Thanks for reading!

Date: 2009-03-09 03:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teprometo.livejournal.com
Gah! Such a tease, you are, Cherry. Such a tease...

Date: 2009-03-09 04:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
I know. I'm sorry...

Date: 2009-03-09 04:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eggbert-koala.livejournal.com
erm...I'm not sure if I've reviewed or not yet but if I haven't then :

Ooooh make harry suffer for it (only for a little while though). I like virgin!Draco when he's not a shy bumbling wreck. I mean it's cute and all but your spunky!draco is so much more interesting to read! Please update soon I need a fix.
Oh and if I have already reviewed then please ignore this post it makes me feel a little silly.
Ttfn
Sarah xx

Date: 2009-03-09 04:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
Oh, he will suffer. I'm glad you like my Draco.

Thanks for reviewing!

Date: 2009-03-10 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] disarming-smile.livejournal.com
In yer face, Harry!Hah. I really like this Draco. Hope to hear a bit more about his views/reasoning on the whole topic.
<3

Date: 2009-03-10 03:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
I'm glad you like my Draco. I'm quite fond of him, too. Eventually, we'll get to know his thoughts a little more. Well, at least what he tells Harry.

Thanks for reading!

Date: 2009-03-11 09:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reicheruchan.livejournal.com
harry has to put in more effort~ work harder harry! can't wait to read the next chapter!

Date: 2009-03-11 03:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
He'll have to if he ever wants to 'unwrap' Draco! I'm glad you're enjoying it.

I'll update as soon as I'm done with my worldcup fic.

Date: 2009-03-14 06:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] krwlr.livejournal.com
Vulnerable Draco ftw <3

Date: 2009-03-14 04:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
Thanks for reading :)

Date: 2009-07-10 01:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noeon.livejournal.com
Awwwww. Nyuuuuuuu! I like fics in which Harry CAN dance. A LOT. This is sexy and sweet and sad.

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