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This one's for [livejournal.com profile] katelinmr, inspired by our recent poll.

(I will never subject myself to writing RPS again. I cringed through every word of this.)



Dan sighed and let his head fall back against the back of the sofa. He'd waited all day for this. The tension of the past few hours began to melt away the instant that Tom's lips closed around the head of his cock. The wet heat of that mouth and the image of Draco's face in the mirror were all that existed now.

Filming scenes with Tom as Draco had always left him feeling randy, but today they had worked on the bathroom scene and oh God Draco looked so fucking hot when he was pissed off and snarling. The temptation to shove a cock inside his mouth to shut him up and show him his place had been all but irresistible.

Dan had always been able to separate fantasy from reality when it came to these rendezvous with Tom, but tonight, he couldn't help pretending that the blonde head bobbing up and down in his lap was Draco's. His fingers slid through the silky hair, slowly tightening their grip until Draco whimpered. The bastard.

Dan kept Draco's head firmly in place as he thrust up again and again. That tongue was wicked. It swirled around Dan's cock at the top of each thrust, and fuck, was that drool sliding down the underside his shaft?

"That's right. Suck it, Malfoy," Dan said in between heavy breaths. The mouth on his cock stilled, and for a moment, he thought his outburst might have been a deal-breaker.

When Tom looked up, he really was Draco; that unmistakable Malfoy glint was in his pale eyes. Dan gasped when he felt the light, threatening scrape of teeth on his cock.

Draco stopped glaring and went back to work. No longer restrained by Dan's hand on his head—the situation was too volatile for power struggles—he slid his mouth purposefully up and down Dan's shaft, as if determined to draw an orgasm from him as fast as possible.

Dan moaned as a hand began to fondle his balls. Fuck that felt good. He curled his fingers, digging his nails into his palm to keep from grabbing onto Draco. It wasn't long before he felt himself pass that point when he no longer cared whether it was Draco or Tom or some girl. All that mattered was that any subsequent swipe of tongue could be the one that finally sent him over the edge.

Yes, that was the one. His cock erupted, sending ripples of pleasure throughout his body, and he bit his knuckle to fight back a moan. Draco's hands were on Dan's hips, keeping him still as his cock pulsed.

When the euphoria passed and Dan chanced a look down, Tom was already zipping up his jeans. Dan suddenly felt like an ass. He reached for Tom, eager to return the favor, but Tom pushed his hands away and stepped back.

"Piss off, Potter."

A grin formed on Dan's face as he watched Draco leave the hotel room. No one ever said Malfoys were easy.
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Date: 2009-04-18 04:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katelinmr.livejournal.com
EEP!! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG it's FINISHED!!!!

I LOVE YOU!! ♥

..

*reads*

..

edit:

O_O that was..

wow..

O_O *blinks*

Like OMG that's the most brilliant little RP thing I've ever read I mean Tom as Draco is just SO increadibly hot and in the end when Tom, or Draco, called Dan Potter I mean OMG and and and the cock sucking and the hair gripping and the sofa and OMG..

OH.. MY.. GOD..

♥ .. ME LOVES!!!!!!

*dies of happy*
Edited Date: 2009-04-18 04:58 am (UTC)

Date: 2009-04-18 05:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
So you didn't like it?

Just kidding.

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Date: 2009-04-18 04:59 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] autumn-veela.livejournal.com
Okay, RPS usually freaks me right out, and to be honest it still did here. But it was incredibly hot. And dirty. Dirty exceeding Scamander twins incest dirty.

So, what I am actually trying to say is that I am a bit scared about how much I liked this, because it was just plain hot.

Date: 2009-04-18 05:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
RPS freaks me out, too. That's why it took me so long to get this down. I'm glad Katelin was so patient with me. I'm glad you enjoyed it even though it's out of your comfort zone.

Erm... I'm reading your fic right now. I'll probably send you comments tomorrow morning. Sorry about the delay. (Love it so far)

Date: 2009-04-18 05:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] abusing-sarcasm.livejournal.com
You win at life so hard... The idea squicked me for a moment and then intrigued me and then I read it and... WOW.

If I'd imagined a PERFECT "Dan/Tom kinda-sorta pretending to be Harry/Draco" fic, this would have been it.

You reign. :D

*glomps you*

Date: 2009-04-18 05:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
I'm very happy about this comment because this was the most painful thing I've ever written.

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Date: 2009-04-18 05:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alaana-fair.livejournal.com
Okay, normally not gonna even think about going there, but... *smirks* Tom is a wicked little devil. Yes, he is. :-D

Date: 2009-04-18 05:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
Would you believe my face is still red from writing this?

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Date: 2009-04-18 05:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luredbyvenus.livejournal.com
*snickers*

I don't read much RPS, but Dan and Tom roleplaying Harry and Draco was pretty awesome. You have to love Tom for playing along at the end, but Dan is still better looking. ;)

I think I might want to read more if I wasn't afraid of what I'd find if I went looking for it.

Date: 2009-04-18 05:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
I agree :) That's why Dan got to be himself for most of this.

I wouldn't suggest looking for Dan/Tom. I tried it, hoping to get in the mood for writing this, and now I am traumatized.

Date: 2009-04-18 05:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] faynia.livejournal.com
LOL This is so oddly perfect considering an hour ago [livejournal.com profile] mystictwilight and I were wondering how Dan can be so freaking innocent and clumsy and sorta flustered and charming all the times on the cameras and yet had lost his virginity before age 17.

This? This right here is clearly how that worked XD

Date: 2009-04-18 06:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
I'm glad it amused you :)

But kindly refrain from pointing out Dan's early loss of virginity and his sluttiness, plsthx. He should have lost it to me!

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Date: 2009-04-18 06:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lijahlover.livejournal.com
OMG I adored every yummy word. I loooooved it I love RPS so that's not shocking :)

In LOTR I mostly only write and read RPS it's only in the HP fandom that I don't. :)

Thank you!

Date: 2009-04-18 06:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
I used to be in the LOTR fandom, too. Although I didn't read/write RPS, I saw a lot more of it there than I do in HP. Maybe it's because these guys were children when it all started. *Ponders*

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Date: 2009-04-18 06:42 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] supergreak.livejournal.com
Hmmm...Method Actors, anyone?

That was wonderful; how they shifted characters so well. And it was just freakin' hot as well. Good job! (Especially at something that freaks you out)

Date: 2009-04-18 07:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
I heard that's what Dan and Tom do to keep that spark alive for the films.

*nods*

Thanks :)

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Date: 2009-04-18 06:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nolagal.livejournal.com
dear lord that's fantastic. i love them getting turned on by the characters.

Date: 2009-04-18 07:06 am (UTC)

Date: 2009-04-18 07:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nuclearsugars.livejournal.com
Oh my. *reads again* I leave my computer for four hours and then I come back and stuff like this is up! WHY ARE YOU MADE OF SO MUCH WIN? WHY IS THIS FIC MADE OF SO MUCH WIN? I don't know and I don't really care, BUT IT'S SO FUCKING GOOD MY BRAIN HAS MELTED.

This, see this fic right here? It needs a fucking sequel. And I won't rest until there's a sequel! Pretty please?

Date: 2009-04-18 01:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
You didn't enjoy it either? Damn, I hoped someone would like it...

thanks *g*

Erm... I really don't know about a sequel. Maybe, MAYBE when I'm done with smoochfest and rarities...

Date: 2009-04-18 07:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aki-hoshi.livejournal.com
You know, normally, I don't like RPS either (except for Drake&Josh AU)....but this kind, I can swallow! *wink* Lovely, dear. Simply brilliant! :D

I will NOT tweet this to Dan and Tom...I will NOT tweet this to Dan and Tom...

Date: 2009-04-18 07:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
LOL! I'm just running over to threaten that! LOL!

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Date: 2009-04-18 07:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
*I'm sorry, but [livejournal.com profile] nursedarry is unavailable at the moment. When she picks herself up off the floor, she'll get back to you.*

Okay, I admit I read this through my fingers, but it was worth it! The shifting characters not only made it more "bearable", but also more HAWT!

Date: 2009-04-18 02:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
Poor you, having to read it through your fingers.... I had to write it. I think I blushed every time I wrote one of their names. As I was writing, Maja_li suggested that I pretend it's AU and write Harry/Draco, then do a find and replace, but considering the premise, that didn't work very well for me, so I had to suffer through the RPS factor.

Date: 2009-04-18 11:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yazzigazzi.livejournal.com
Erm.

Wow?

I mean, I usually don't reach much RPS (exept for Will/Skandar maybe) and I only gave it a try because it was written by you and then it was short...

and it blew me away and made me crave more Dan/Tom (role-playing) fics and, damn you, you said you'd never write RPS again and now I'm miserable. So, I don't know if I should thank you in a good or bad way xD

No, really. Loved it!

Date: 2009-04-18 02:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I'm appalled that so many people are asking for a sequel, but I'll tell you one thing: I've never been able to say no to my f-list. I don't foresee it happening until the semester is over and the fest fics I have due at the end of this month are finished.

Date: 2009-04-18 02:47 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] auroraprimavera.livejournal.com
This was unbearably hot! WOW. Very well done.

And I know what you mean about RPS - I don't normally read it/write it. But nowadays I've been pulled into writing Merlin RPS - HAHAHA. And I understand the feeling of "WTF AM I DOING OH NOZ" that you have.

*squishes*

Date: 2009-04-18 05:32 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-04-18 03:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kimberry531.livejournal.com
Here via abusing_sarcasm's rec. I've never read RPS and I don't think I like the idea so much, but this was fantastic! I whole-heartedly agree with Dan - Draco's crying scene is godly. I would tap that. I would read and adore a sequel =D

Date: 2009-04-18 05:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
I love that scene! The new trailer is what inspired this premise. Glad you enjoyed!

Date: 2009-04-18 04:21 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] anexiana.livejournal.com
I never thought I'd read something like this. Lol, I didn't even know people wrote Dan/Tom RPS. xP But, omg, this is made of such win! Tom is such a wicked little darling. =)

Date: 2009-04-18 05:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
I knew about it, but I've been able to block it out until now, lol. Not a big Tom fan, but he makes a great Draco.


Thanks for reading x

Date: 2009-04-18 06:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eggbert-koala.livejournal.com
a bit creepy but they were so in charactor that it didn't seem too bad. I enjoyed it though...a lot. RPS was the first type of slash I ever read. It seemed less creepy back then.

Date: 2009-04-18 06:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
You mean in character for H/D?

Date: 2009-04-18 06:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jordanneleigh.livejournal.com
Wow. Great job here.
RPS! it's amazing RPS! I only read RPS that others say is good, and I am SO glad I read this.
this was amazing!

Date: 2009-04-18 07:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
Thanks for the lovely comment. I'm glad this fic is getting such a great reception.

Date: 2009-04-18 08:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enchanted-jae.livejournal.com
Ooooh, I was a little squirmy about reading this, but I loved how you made it just as much H/D as RPS. Wow!

Date: 2009-04-19 03:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
It was the only way I could bear writing it

Thanks!

Date: 2009-04-18 08:08 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] moonlitdark.livejournal.com
That felt like an odd experience... I don't think I've read anything like that before. But it was good! Very, very good! ;)

I may be in a state of shocked euphoria. ;D You are amazing, I hope you know!

Date: 2009-04-19 03:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
Wow, thanks :D

Date: 2009-04-20 06:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byaghro.livejournal.com
I was nervous about this but you did an EXCELLENT job! And I totally understand how this would have been VERY difficult to write!

Date: 2009-04-20 07:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
Thank you :)

Date: 2009-04-21 12:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] utteramusement.livejournal.com
OMG you win at life!

This was so fantastic! It's crazy how Tom barely speaks (his mouth was rather occupied) and yet I get this feeling of him channelizing Draco perfectly that just killed me!

And because this was great ad I love torturing people, I shall join the Sequel train!! *is demanding*

Date: 2009-04-21 07:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it :D IF there's going to be a sequel, it won't happen until after the first week of May.

Date: 2009-04-21 07:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aldehyde.livejournal.com
*dies a million deaths*

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I WANT MORE~!!!!! FUCK THIS IS GOOD. and i don't even read rps! [except for the occasional j2 b/c hell, how can i resist].

unffffffffff. i think the hottest part is how you blurred the lines between pure RPS [which can come off as silly sometimes] and fandom. OM NOM NOM!

Date: 2009-04-21 07:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
OMG, your icon had me cracking up. I really need to see those balls. There must be pics somewhere, right?

*regrets not making the trip to NY to see Equus*

Glad you enjoyed it!

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Date: 2009-04-24 03:19 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] snegurochka_lee
Whoa-ho! Here from [livejournal.com profile] aldehyde's rec, and a;lskdjfalksdj YES PLEASE. Love the slippery slide between real and fiction. I ♥ actor!RPS when it's, like, about acting. :))

Date: 2009-04-24 05:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
It's amusing that what I considered a weakness actually became the strength of this fic. I blurred the lines between D/T and H/D only because I was too squicked by the idea of writing pure rps. But I'm glad it worked out so well.

Thanks for reading and commenting ♥
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