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This one's for
katelinmr, inspired by our recent poll.
(I will never subject myself to writing RPS again. I cringed through every word of this.)
Dan sighed and let his head fall back against the back of the sofa. He'd waited all day for this. The tension of the past few hours began to melt away the instant that Tom's lips closed around the head of his cock. The wet heat of that mouth and the image of Draco's face in the mirror were all that existed now.
Filming scenes with Tom as Draco had always left him feeling randy, but today they had worked on the bathroom scene and oh God Draco looked so fucking hot when he was pissed off and snarling. The temptation to shove a cock inside his mouth to shut him up and show him his place had been all but irresistible.
Dan had always been able to separate fantasy from reality when it came to these rendezvous with Tom, but tonight, he couldn't help pretending that the blonde head bobbing up and down in his lap was Draco's. His fingers slid through the silky hair, slowly tightening their grip until Draco whimpered. The bastard.
Dan kept Draco's head firmly in place as he thrust up again and again. That tongue was wicked. It swirled around Dan's cock at the top of each thrust, and fuck, was that drool sliding down the underside his shaft?
"That's right. Suck it, Malfoy," Dan said in between heavy breaths. The mouth on his cock stilled, and for a moment, he thought his outburst might have been a deal-breaker.
When Tom looked up, he really was Draco; that unmistakable Malfoy glint was in his pale eyes. Dan gasped when he felt the light, threatening scrape of teeth on his cock.
Draco stopped glaring and went back to work. No longer restrained by Dan's hand on his head—the situation was too volatile for power struggles—he slid his mouth purposefully up and down Dan's shaft, as if determined to draw an orgasm from him as fast as possible.
Dan moaned as a hand began to fondle his balls. Fuck that felt good. He curled his fingers, digging his nails into his palm to keep from grabbing onto Draco. It wasn't long before he felt himself pass that point when he no longer cared whether it was Draco or Tom or some girl. All that mattered was that any subsequent swipe of tongue could be the one that finally sent him over the edge.
Yes, that was the one. His cock erupted, sending ripples of pleasure throughout his body, and he bit his knuckle to fight back a moan. Draco's hands were on Dan's hips, keeping him still as his cock pulsed.
When the euphoria passed and Dan chanced a look down, Tom was already zipping up his jeans. Dan suddenly felt like an ass. He reached for Tom, eager to return the favor, but Tom pushed his hands away and stepped back.
"Piss off, Potter."
A grin formed on Dan's face as he watched Draco leave the hotel room. No one ever said Malfoys were easy.
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(I will never subject myself to writing RPS again. I cringed through every word of this.)
Dan sighed and let his head fall back against the back of the sofa. He'd waited all day for this. The tension of the past few hours began to melt away the instant that Tom's lips closed around the head of his cock. The wet heat of that mouth and the image of Draco's face in the mirror were all that existed now.
Filming scenes with Tom as Draco had always left him feeling randy, but today they had worked on the bathroom scene and oh God Draco looked so fucking hot when he was pissed off and snarling. The temptation to shove a cock inside his mouth to shut him up and show him his place had been all but irresistible.
Dan had always been able to separate fantasy from reality when it came to these rendezvous with Tom, but tonight, he couldn't help pretending that the blonde head bobbing up and down in his lap was Draco's. His fingers slid through the silky hair, slowly tightening their grip until Draco whimpered. The bastard.
Dan kept Draco's head firmly in place as he thrust up again and again. That tongue was wicked. It swirled around Dan's cock at the top of each thrust, and fuck, was that drool sliding down the underside his shaft?
"That's right. Suck it, Malfoy," Dan said in between heavy breaths. The mouth on his cock stilled, and for a moment, he thought his outburst might have been a deal-breaker.
When Tom looked up, he really was Draco; that unmistakable Malfoy glint was in his pale eyes. Dan gasped when he felt the light, threatening scrape of teeth on his cock.
Draco stopped glaring and went back to work. No longer restrained by Dan's hand on his head—the situation was too volatile for power struggles—he slid his mouth purposefully up and down Dan's shaft, as if determined to draw an orgasm from him as fast as possible.
Dan moaned as a hand began to fondle his balls. Fuck that felt good. He curled his fingers, digging his nails into his palm to keep from grabbing onto Draco. It wasn't long before he felt himself pass that point when he no longer cared whether it was Draco or Tom or some girl. All that mattered was that any subsequent swipe of tongue could be the one that finally sent him over the edge.
Yes, that was the one. His cock erupted, sending ripples of pleasure throughout his body, and he bit his knuckle to fight back a moan. Draco's hands were on Dan's hips, keeping him still as his cock pulsed.
When the euphoria passed and Dan chanced a look down, Tom was already zipping up his jeans. Dan suddenly felt like an ass. He reached for Tom, eager to return the favor, but Tom pushed his hands away and stepped back.
"Piss off, Potter."
A grin formed on Dan's face as he watched Draco leave the hotel room. No one ever said Malfoys were easy.
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Date: 2009-04-18 04:53 am (UTC)I LOVE YOU!! ♥
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O_O that was..
wow..
O_O *blinks*
Like OMG that's the most brilliant little RP thing I've ever read I mean Tom as Draco is just SO increadibly hot and in the end when Tom, or Draco, called Dan Potter I mean OMG and and and the cock sucking and the hair gripping and the sofa and OMG..
OH.. MY.. GOD..
♥ .. ME LOVES!!!!!!
*dies of happy*
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Date: 2009-04-18 05:12 am (UTC)Just kidding.
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Date: 2009-04-18 04:59 am (UTC)So, what I am actually trying to say is that I am a bit scared about how much I liked this, because it was just plain hot.
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Date: 2009-04-18 05:09 am (UTC)Erm... I'm reading your fic right now. I'll probably send you comments tomorrow morning. Sorry about the delay. (Love it so far)
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Date: 2009-04-18 05:15 am (UTC)If I'd imagined a PERFECT "Dan/Tom kinda-sorta pretending to be Harry/Draco" fic, this would have been it.
You reign. :D
*glomps you*
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Date: 2009-04-18 05:25 am (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2009-04-18 05:36 am (UTC)I don't read much RPS, but Dan and Tom roleplaying Harry and Draco was pretty awesome. You have to love Tom for playing along at the end, but Dan is still better looking. ;)
I think I might want to read more if I wasn't afraid of what I'd find if I went looking for it.
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Date: 2009-04-18 05:59 am (UTC)I wouldn't suggest looking for Dan/Tom. I tried it, hoping to get in the mood for writing this, and now I am traumatized.
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Date: 2009-04-18 05:48 am (UTC)This? This right here is clearly how that worked XD
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Date: 2009-04-18 06:02 am (UTC)But kindly refrain from pointing out Dan's early loss of virginity and his sluttiness, plsthx. He should have lost it to me!
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Date: 2009-04-18 06:13 am (UTC)In LOTR I mostly only write and read RPS it's only in the HP fandom that I don't. :)
Thank you!
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Date: 2009-04-18 06:37 am (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2009-04-18 06:42 am (UTC)That was wonderful; how they shifted characters so well. And it was just freakin' hot as well. Good job! (Especially at something that freaks you out)
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Date: 2009-04-18 07:04 am (UTC)*nods*
Thanks :)
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Date: 2009-04-18 06:56 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-18 07:06 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-18 07:17 am (UTC)This, see this fic right here? It needs a fucking sequel. And I won't rest until there's a sequel! Pretty please?
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Date: 2009-04-18 01:56 pm (UTC)thanks *g*
Erm... I really don't know about a sequel. Maybe, MAYBE when I'm done with smoochfest and rarities...
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Date: 2009-04-18 07:46 am (UTC)I will NOT tweet this to Dan and Tom...I will NOT tweet this to Dan and Tom...
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Date: 2009-04-18 07:48 am (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2009-04-18 07:47 am (UTC)Okay, I admit I read this through my fingers, but it was worth it! The shifting characters not only made it more "bearable", but also more HAWT!
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Date: 2009-04-18 02:05 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-18 11:36 am (UTC)Wow?
I mean, I usually don't reach much RPS (exept for Will/Skandar maybe) and I only gave it a try because it was written by you and then it was short...
and it blew me away and made me crave more Dan/Tom (role-playing) fics and, damn you, you said you'd never write RPS again and now I'm miserable. So, I don't know if I should thank you in a good or bad way xD
No, really. Loved it!
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Date: 2009-04-18 02:08 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-18 02:47 pm (UTC)And I know what you mean about RPS - I don't normally read it/write it. But nowadays I've been pulled into writing Merlin RPS - HAHAHA. And I understand the feeling of "WTF AM I DOING OH NOZ" that you have.
*squishes*
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Date: 2009-04-18 05:45 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading x
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Date: 2009-04-18 06:18 pm (UTC)RPS! it's amazing RPS! I only read RPS that others say is good, and I am SO glad I read this.
this was amazing!
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Date: 2009-04-19 03:53 am (UTC)It was the only way I could bear writing itThanks!
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Date: 2009-04-18 08:08 pm (UTC)I may be in a state of shocked euphoria. ;D You are amazing, I hope you know!
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Date: 2009-04-21 12:41 pm (UTC)This was so fantastic! It's crazy how Tom barely speaks (his mouth was rather occupied) and yet I get this feeling of him channelizing Draco perfectly that just killed me!
And because this was great ad I love torturing people, I shall join the Sequel train!! *is demanding*
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Date: 2009-04-21 07:41 pm (UTC)NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I WANT MORE~!!!!! FUCK THIS IS GOOD. and i don't even read rps! [except for the occasional j2 b/c hell, how can i resist].
unffffffffff. i think the hottest part is how you blurred the lines between pure RPS [which can come off as silly sometimes] and fandom. OM NOM NOM!
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Date: 2009-04-21 07:48 pm (UTC)*regrets not making the trip to NY to see Equus*
Glad you enjoyed it!
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Date: 2009-04-24 03:19 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-24 05:44 pm (UTC)Thanks for reading and commenting ♥
Here via Lee's rec ;)
Date: 2009-05-08 09:07 pm (UTC)Re: Here via Lee's rec ;)
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