B-day Fic for [livejournal.com profile] katelinmr

Feb. 25th, 2010 12:22 pm
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Title: Betrayal
Author: [livejournal.com profile] drippingcherry
Rating: R
Pairing Harry/Draco, Ron
Wordcount: 411
Beta: Many thanks to the lovely [livejournal.com profile] nursedarry
Disclaimer: Characters are the property of J.K. Rowling, et al. No profit is being made from this fanfiction.
Warnings: Voyeurism
Summary: Ron feels betrayed.
Author's Notes: This was written as a birthday gift for [livejournal.com profile] katelinmr, who wanted a fic in which Harry and Draco try to hide their relationship, but are found out.



Ron had never felt so betrayed. It wasn't because Harry had been sneaking around with someone for a good part of the year. All eyes had been on the Boy-Who-Lived ever since they'd first come to Hogwarts, and Ron respected Harry's desire to hide from the world. Nor was it because Harry hadn't confided in Ron about his preference for blokes. Admittedly it wasn't the most comfortable topic to bring up with a friend of the same sex. No, it was Harry's choice of partner that made Ron's blood curdle and his fingers tighten around his wand until his knuckles were white.

Ron had known for a while that Harry's love interest wasn't in Gryffindor. He'd kept an eye on students who remained in the Tower whenever Harry went MIA, and over the course of the past few months, he'd eliminated everyone from his list of suspects. That left Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff. Ron had even, for a moment or two, considered that the object of his friend's affection might be in Slytherin. Harry was a bit of a snake—everyone knew that—so it was possible he was drawn to a Slytherin. And Ron would have accepted even that. But why that particular Slytherin? Why him? Their group had always despised Malfoy. It was a given—Like Neville melting down his cauldron in Potions. How dare Harry break the status quo?

Ron peered from behind a tree at the couple that lay by the lake while everyone else was in class. It was a sour potion to swallow, but a captivating one nonetheless. The afternoon sunlight turned their skin into ivory and gold. Indeed Harry was the precious metal in this pairing, gripping his treasure possessively yet as if it were more awe-inspiring than he himself could ever be. Together they were more striking than any couple could ever be.

Draco's vocalisations were as annoying as Ron would have expected—if he'd ever been masochistic enough to put himself through the agony of thinking about it. The blond gasped and moaned and cried, "Yes, like that!" But Harry was enthralled; he gazed up at his lover with parted lips as he strove to maintain the perfect angle. Tanned hands held Draco's torso while pale ones stroked Harry's arms. Every touch and every move, however feral or impatient, held a warm and fragile undertone which could only be created by one emotion. Ron knew it, and he looked away.

Date: 2010-02-25 07:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nursedarry.livejournal.com
How much do I ♥ your new layout?

Date: 2010-02-25 07:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
A lot, I hope!

Date: 2010-02-25 10:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pheonixfire39.livejournal.com
i finished this story and went "wooww" outloud.
The descriptions were lovely, especially how their skin was shining like silver and gold.

Date: 2010-02-25 11:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
Thank you :)

Date: 2010-02-25 07:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xanthippe1963.livejournal.com
What a lovely little fic, I quite like it.

Thanks (c:

Date: 2010-02-25 07:49 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-02-25 07:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girlofavalon.livejournal.com
Is it just me or Ron is *really* jealous? *snickers*

Date: 2010-02-25 07:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
Yeah, I think he's jealous. BTW, I'm back now-- the meeting was called off-- so you can email me.
Edited Date: 2010-02-25 07:50 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-02-25 07:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gator-girl-13.livejournal.com
"Indeed Harry was the precious metal in this pairing, gripping his treasure possessively yet as if it were more awe-inspiring than he himself could ever be."

So much love for this! : )

Date: 2010-02-25 07:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
I was nervous about that line-- thought it might be cheesy, lol. Thanks!

Date: 2010-02-25 08:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fancypantsdylan.livejournal.com
Oh wow this was just awesome, loved Ron's POV and was that a touch of jealously I detected there ;)

Date: 2010-02-25 08:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
I think so ;)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Date: 2010-02-25 09:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] utteramusement.livejournal.com
YAY! Katelin will be so pleased! I love how into this Dan is *squishes* Not normally my thing but I love it if it comes from you!

Date: 2010-02-25 09:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
Dan isn't in this, lol. Did you mean to comment on the RPS I posted a few days ago?

Date: 2010-02-25 10:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] utteramusement.livejournal.com
Oh well fuck! How did I manage that!?!

lol, sorry! I did read this though! And it was lovely, I love how clearly their love comes through and Ron has his pain comming really ;P damn I'm embarrazed now *blushes* I'll just go post Katelin's birthday porn and then hide OK?

Date: 2010-02-25 11:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
LOL it's okay. Glad you enjoyed them!

Date: 2010-02-25 10:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laila2605.livejournal.com
Poor poor Ron. Could it be because he himself love's Harry

Date: 2010-02-25 11:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
Could be ;) Thanks for reading/commenting.

Date: 2010-02-26 03:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] groolover.livejournal.com
This was very lovely. Thank you.

Date: 2010-02-26 03:41 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-02-26 07:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zebrui.livejournal.com
Beautiful!

Also - your layout O_O Wow!

Date: 2010-02-26 08:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
Thanks... and thanks!

Date: 2010-02-26 11:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reicheruchan.livejournal.com
love it!!!!!

Date: 2010-02-26 08:48 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-02-26 03:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katelinmr.livejournal.com
Wow

just wow

Sweetie thank you so much for this wonderful (and SMEXIN) birthday gift! I would show it to all my friends if I wasn't afraid of what they would think when they find out I like gay porn xD

*squishes* *smooches* *hugs* *twirls* gods I love you!

Again thank you so much!!!! !

♥♥♥♥

Date: 2010-02-26 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it! Sorry it's so short, but I had an exam to study for and I wanted to post it on your actual birthday, not after .

Do you know of any comms where I can get a nice profile code? I love your new journal layout, btw.

Date: 2010-02-26 08:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katelinmr.livejournal.com
I usually just go to mintyapple. Want the link?

Date: 2010-02-26 08:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
Ah. No, I have them on my list... forgot about them, lol.

Date: 2010-02-26 08:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katelinmr.livejournal.com
well go there, they have the prettiest one imo.. btw.. thanks, gonna change it though n_n

Date: 2010-02-26 08:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katelinmr.livejournal.com
LOL got bored with it :D

Date: 2010-02-26 11:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] queerlove.livejournal.com
love this

Date: 2010-02-27 08:01 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-02-27 06:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enchanted-jae.livejournal.com
Oh, it's lovely! Even with the spite of Ron's thoughts behind it. *whaps him*

Date: 2010-02-27 08:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drippingcherry.livejournal.com
Can you really blame him?

Date: 2010-03-02 04:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jtsbbsps-dk.livejournal.com
Love it! Brilliant! :D

Date: 2010-03-02 06:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] paper-moonshine.livejournal.com
Excellent piece - and your layout is lovely :)

Date: 2010-03-05 11:32 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-07-17 02:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valkyrie-fierce.livejournal.com
I enjoyed this. Thank you.

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